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Thread: TPG: Week 15- Patrick Brusnahan

  1. CalvinCamp Guest

    Quote Originally Posted by AdamH View Post
    In summation, this one frame as cramped as it is does not show that someone's fully lost control of the car.
    It could be done. I won't say it's the best way to do it, but it's not impossible. Which was my only point.

    And, besides, the script does provide for more than one panel to fully show the loss of control. I'll grant you that the two panels that were called for really need to be three panels, but the first panel doesn't need to be split, only the second.

    All the first one really has to do is show Zack with the wheel cranked to one side and a horrified expression, the positioning of the truck could be skipped entirely if it's too much detail. The following panel description (which should have been two panels, as Stephen said, because that one actually is a moving panel) provides the additional details of the truck skidding and then crashing into a tree, to sell the complete event.



  2. PBrusnahan Guest

    Thanks for the help, Stephen. And yeah, this does need a lot of severe clean-up, with a lot more clarity needed. I meant for it to be exaggerated, but there's exaggerated and then there's just unrealistic, which is think this is leaning towards.

    Would it be alright if I cleaned up the pages you showed and posted it here?



  3. StevenForbes Guest

    That would be fine, Patrick.



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