Yes, just not very successful revenge.
"Living Robert Venditti's Plan B!"
Nice story, John, and nice first edit job (aside from Steve's script a while back) Calvin. Looking forward to seeing more from both of you.
Although I would like to say there really weren't too many flaws in this script, aside from that bit about pacing and a few technological / lighting issues. Other than that Calvin really didn't have much to say. So come on people. Quick! Somebody send in a terrible script to see if Calvin can rip up somebody as bad as Steven!