Ok so Iexpected that (and I feel deeply ashamed for some of the things I've missed )
"Both Bear and man work as one to try and stop their attacker." was me being "flowery" and using to many words to say the "The Man and Bear attck her" (plus I need to say how they are I guess.
Panel 2, shoudl have read "Viewing the above panel from a reverse angle" DOH! (hopefully that explains why we see the bears back in this panel (as we were looking at it head on in the last one)
Toddler (to me) is about 4-6 (though younger makes sense as to toddle is an uncoordinated walk... like the younger age yiu've suggested)
"ARGHH" was trying to show her throwing all she had into her swing.. (never been good at the sounds people make).
I was hoping that the telling off of the kids and the kids being a bit brazen would show the gulf between them here and the (as of yet unwritten) before all this started. I also wanted to show her as being a bit overly cocky and confident (like Spideys quips).
All in all it's a bit of a mess that I can now fix thanks to Calvin and whomever else has some advice, comments.
I love TPG. I hope it never goes.