Hmm...the caution. That was an intended variation, but you know that. I knew that I was bending the rules. Thanks for letting me slide.
I'm very guilty of playing with this assignment. I wanted to use uninflected imagery that would be the other to Girl Intense and also enhance the emotional changes in her panels.
You're a pretty smart writer who would call bullshit on bad writing (as you've done with me in the past). I guess I wanted to see if I could write the assignment with a more implicit intention and have it work.
(I also make a hypocrite out of myself by telling Roberts last week to work towards the goal of the exercise and nothing more.)
Girl Intense is my CPP mascot from here on out. Watch out!
P.S. GETTING AWAY WITH THE POV OF LOOKING DOWN AT THE PHONE HAS ME PUMPED!